End of an experiment….

August 12, 2008 by tonywalther

So maybe trying to write novels and posting them on a blog site is not really the way to do things after all. I tried it, but things got too complicated. So for now, I leave what I have. So let’s just call this an end to my experiment. I may save this blog site to do reviews or commentary on books that I have read or am reading.

And if you are interested, I do intend to finish Tuleville Sundown, the book that I tried to write on this and one other blog site. I’ll just do it the old fashioned way. I’ll write it in private and compile a manuscript and then figure out what to do with it.

Thanks for reading, to those of you who did. As I said, I may continue this site with book reviews or something of that nature.

Tony Walther

Tuleville Sundown (Page 1- ?)

July 17, 2008 by tonywalther

(Note to readers: I’m going to try to move this novel in progress entirely to this site. I am not sure how long it will take for me to resume progress on this experiment or if I will even complete this work posting it online as I go. But for those of you who have read it so far, thanks, and thanks as well to those of you who choose to read it now.

(To add to the confusion, I’m posting some pages separately on this site and I have a problem in that due to the mysteries of the computer it seems to want to display much of it in small type, but you can adjust the view on your toolbar to larger type, I believe. As I suggested on the other site, if you’re really commited to reading this, printing it out is probably the way to go.)

(copyright) 

Tuleville (Tooleyville) Sundown

By Tony Walther

The railroad tracks stretched into the flat horizon with heavy heat lines crossing over them. A faint bright light could be seen in the distance. The light gradually became larger and still larger, until it was noticeably the headlamp of a locomotive.

Traffic was lined up on both sides of the tracks north of Tuleville as the wig wag red signals flashed their warning.

And as the Southern Pacific Daylight entered the Tuleville depot, little tractors pulling wagons made their way to the tracks in anticipation of loading and unloading baggage.

A black porter stepped off the train and placed a step stool at the bottom of a train door.

Four passengers descended the steps, a teenaged girl dressed in sweater and skirt, a younger boy, dressed in slacks and a light jacket, a woman wearing a coat and long white gloves and a hat with a little half veil, and at the woman’s right hand, a little boy in a city kid outfit, a coat with short pants and sporty cap.

They all looked out of place in the farm town of Tuleville on what was a hot July day in California’s Central Valley. And the expressions on their faces indicated they felt somewhat dazed.

As they were arriving, a 1953 Studebaker pulled into the train depot parking lot. Out stepped a dapper man, with hat cocked just so, wearing a coat and tie.

The dazed look of the faces of the new arrivals turned to smiles of happiness and relief as they saw the father of the family coming to meet them.

“I see you all made it. Welcome to Tuleville.”

“My, it sure is warm here,” the woman noted, her smile turning down just slightly.

“Yes,” responded the man. “I forgot how hot it gets here in the Valley,” he added almost apologetically.

When the family arrived at their new residence, the moving men were already there, hard at work.

And that evening, the transplanted former residents of San Francisco sat around their familiar oblong formica dinner table, except for the mother, who was wearing an apron and carrying a pitcher of milk to the table. The father was still wearing his suit, minus the coat. The daughter was wearing a white blouse and skirt. The older boy was now wearing a T-shirt with horizontal stripes, and the little boy was wearing a white T-shirt and blue jeans rolled up at the cuffs.

“Did you get them to raise your salary above $70 per week,” the mother, now seated at the table, asked.

“Well no, but I am going to be doing some extra work to make up for that,” the father answered in a low and manly, but not-so-confident tone.

“And you’re still supposed to work five and a half days a week, with split days off?” she responded in a tone that was civil but that revealed some disgust.

The father now had a faint smile on his face. “It’s not what I would have preferred, but I don’t seem to have much of a choice.”

Meanwhile, the daughter looked over at her little brother and stuck her tongue out.”She’s sticking her tongue out at me!,” the little boy screamed out, pointing to his sister.
She in turn displayed an expression of utter innocence.
“Not this again,” the older boy remarked dryly.
The incident faded and light family discussion ensued.
Seeing a chance to get in on the conversation, the little boy addressed his father. “You said we were moving to the country. Is this the country?”
“We’re right across the street from the country,” he answered good -naturedly.
The family’s new residence was an older home with tall trees around it. Nearby on the same side of the street was a relatively new tract of homes. There was also a large plot of dry dusty dirt that was destined to be a new housing tract. But as the father had told his young son, across the street was the country, that is rural farmland. Directly across the street from their new residence was a low brick wall, broken by a driveway. Set back from that was an old, but well kept farm house and a barn and corrals and a wide expanse of open land, most of which was planted to alfalfa.
One evening, several days after moving in, the father and the two boys were out back in a garden spot he had created with a shovel and a rake. He had previously wetted the ground with a sprinkler.

The older boy used an old wooden broom handle to poke little holes in the moist dirt. Following his brother, the little boy crawled along on his hands and knees, popping corn seeds into each hole. Meanwhile, the father, now dressed in khaki pants and a Hawaiian shirt and a panama hat, worked along a wire netting fence, chopping at weeds with a shovel.

Looking over the fence one could now see the sun, a giant orangish ball, setting in the west.

So, the family, composed of the father, Pierre Labrew, and his wife Marjorie, and their children, from oldest to youngest, Marie, Remy, and Jack, had now settled into their new home far away from the City.

….The local newspaper was the Tuleville Times, housed in a long rectangular one-story building on the north edge of Main Street. Directly across the street was an alleyway, with the Tuleville Cafe

on one side and Joe’s liquors on the other side.On this July morning, a short man with wire-rimmed glasses and buck teeth came rushing out the front doors of the Tuleville Times. He was wearing baggy pants and his suit coat was wide open. He was carrying a coffee cup in his outstretched hand as if it were leading the way. He ran across the street.
He pushed open the swinging doors of the coffee shop and asked, “what’s new?”
“You’re the news man, why don’t you tell us,? ” said the man behind the lunch counter doing some breakfast dishes in the sink.
“Hey Scoop, the circus is coming to town,” said an old man sitting at a stool at the counter.
“Yep, I’m sure all the children are excited about that,” Scoop replied.
“My brother Pete the railroad engineer told me he’s bringing up the train from LA that’s hauling all the circus animals. That’s sure goona be a sight to see,” the old man said.
Scoop, who had just put his coffee cup on the counter, looked intrigued. “Well, I didn’t know they were bringing the animals in on a train. I thought they’d be hauling them in by trucks.”

“Oh yeah,” said the old man. “I remember back before the war when I was living up in Raisin City a circus train came to town and a lion got loose during the night. No one even knew anything about it till the morning. Some lady went out on her front porch to pick up her milk delivery and came face the face with the biggest cat she ever saw. But I guess the lion took one look at her in her house coat and curlers and got scared and ran away.”"I think I know the feeling,” said the man behind the counter.
“So, when is this train coming in?” Scoop asked.
“It’s comin in this evening about six, Pete told me,” said the old man.
Scoop grabbed his coffee cup that had just been filled by the man behind the counter. “Got to go. I’ve got a paper to make up,” said Scoop.
As he rushed out the front door, the man behind the counter yelled after him, “I’ll let you know what the news is once my Raisin City Gazette gets here.” Scoop didn’t acknowledge the remark, but he heard it. As he rushed across the street with his coffee cup leading his way, he mulled over the remark. Everyone in Tuleville it seemed thought that all the real news was in the bigger city’s newspaper. The Raisin City Gazette was a much bigger paper, but in reality it covered very little of the Tuleville news, but it did have a local stringer who seemed to always be at the scene of the big stories when they did occur. Wasn’t he there when the Tuleville Lumber Co. burned to the ground last year? He got a picture with flames leaping into the air and filed a story with lively quotes from the fire chief and the owner of the local landmark. The Tuleville Times had to settle for next-day photos of cold ashes and a rehash story of what everyone could read in the Raisin City Gazette. Scoop was born back east and had majored in journalism. But now solidly into middle age, he knew he had risen as high as he would ever go, a second banana editor on a small town newspaper.
Scoop entered the newsroom at a run, and as he brushed past the desk of his new photographer-reporter, Pierre Labrew, he said: “I’m going to need you to stay late this afternoon. The circus train is coming in at six and we need to get some good photos for tomorrow’s paper.”

Pierre, who was typing out a caption for the day’s front page shot, Miss July, also the Alfalfa Growers Queen, who was standing, appropriately, in a field of blooming alfalfa, nodded his head. Pierre had worked at much bigger papers and even the news wire service, but for some unknown reason, unknown to even him, he had gone back to the valley of his childhood. He’d been a reporter, photographer, and wire service editor. He covered the first meeting of the United Nations in San Francisco. Now he was doing things like making pictures of the monthly calendar girl for the Tuleville Times.

That evening, Scoop and Pierre went over to the train depot in their respective cars, Pierre in his Studebaker and Scoop in his Desoto. The circus train had arrived. There was a makeshift corral at the side of what looked like a cattle car. None other than the King of Beasts, a lion, fluffy main and all, was roaming around. Holding court was a circus ringmaster with a top hat and coat with tails. A clown with a big red nose, tufts of read hair at the sides of his head and some oversized shoes, was making his rounds, accompanied by a pack of monkeys. Pierre made a few photos with his speed graphic, a big box of a camera with cumbersome plates that had to be slid in and out for each photo. Scoop looked around, sizing things up. A lot of town’s folk had gathered around.

How could this thing best be used for tomorrow’s newspaper? That was the thought on Scoop Redford’s mind. His eyes darted back and forth to see if that pesky Raisin City Gazette stringer was anywhere around. No sign of him. Good.

In less than thirty minutes the show was over, and the animals were put back on the train. Pierre was talking to the ringmaster, taking some notes. Scoop hung back. He went to the other side of the train. Later he came back around and told Pierre: “You might as well write up a little story, but don’t stay at the office too late. I’ll need you bright and early tomorrow morning.”

 

Pierre worked in the dark, carefully handling the film plates, processing them in the darkroom. After he turned the lights back on, he hung the film up to dry. He went back to the news room and sat at a desk where he spread out his notes. He banged out a story on the manual royal typewriter.

Pierre was an editor for Associated Press in San Francisco, but he was stuck on permanent night shift. Any hope of getting on day shift had been dashed when the correspondents came home from the war. As a reward for their sacrifices, they were offered the choice day slots.

He had been a reporter on a newspaper in El Paso, Texas back in the 30s. He dabbled in news photography and became their first staff photographer. So now he had reached back into a former skill to get a job away from the doldrums of being a night shift editor at the wire service in downtown San Francisco and day sleeping. He thought maybe he’d start a new life in the valley of his youth. Maybe he’d open up his own photographic studio. Perhaps he’d buy a little farm. He had grown up on one. But for now he would do his job with the highest professionalism he could, a level of professionalism that had always guaranteed him a job, if not happiness. No, here he was not happy, and he had to take a substantial pay cut. He really didn’t know what he wanted, but he was still looking at fifty years old.

He went back to the darkroom and took the dried film off the rack and slid it into the enlarger to make up an array of prints from which the editor could choose in the morning. He’d put in two extra hours of work for which he would not be paid.

“Well, here you are. We already ate dinner,” was the cool greeting delivered by Marjorie Labrew when Pierre arrived home. She reheated some dinner for him. The children were in the living room watching television. Little Jack and his older brother were prone on the floor with their chins resting on their hands. Their sister, Marie, was curled up on a strange chair that looked like a giant Chinese straw hat turned upside down. The furniture was sparse in the Labrew household. They had a couch with hideaway bed, the funny chair and another chair that looked like it belonged out on the lawn.

After awhile, little Jack wandered into the kitchen and said: “Where ya been Pierre?” He addressed his father by his first name because that’s what his sister and brother did, and no one was sure why.

“Oh, the straw boss had me work late at the salt mine,” Pierre answered. Marjorie smiled sardonically.

“Do you like to work?” asked little Jack.

“I don’t like to work for other people.”

“Then why do you work for them?”

“Someone has to pay for the house and food.”

“Could you work for yourself?”

“I wished I could, but that’s not possible right now.”

Marjorie left the table, shaking her head. She’d heard it all before. She went back to the sink to finish the dishes.

It was a hot sweaty night. The house had no air conditioning, save a swamp cooler that was all but useless and that was turned off after everyone went to bed.

……. Early in the morning Scoop Redford’s Desoto moved slowly down the street near the railroad tracks. It stopped and out came Scoop. He looked around furtively. He walked over to the circus train. Shortly, he came back to his car and drove off to the newspaper office.

Sometime later, Tony Consiglio, proprietor of Tony’s Market, an old time corner grocery store, was arranging his daily outside display of fruits and vegetables. Having completed the chore, he took a deep breath of the fresh air in the only relatively cool part of what would surly be another scorcher. At least he had a nice striped awning at the entrance of his little market. He went back into the store. Not five minutes later he heard a racket outside. It was as if something was screeching and it also sounded like his displays were being knocked over. He rushed outside. A monkey was peeling one of his bananas. Another monkey was sampling an orange, and still another had tipped over a bushel of apples.

“Hey whatsa happenin here!?” the startled grocer yelled out.

The troupe of monkeys ran off, carrying some of the fruit with them. But they only retreated a short distance, screeching back as if to mock him.

Pierre was sound asleep before the telephone rang. He stumbled to the kitchen and picked up the receiver from the conical-shaped rotary dial phone.

“Hey Pierre, this is Scoop. Get down to Tony’s Market as quick as you can with your camera. There’s a lot of monkey business going on down there!”
The photo with a monkey eating a banana and Tony in the background throwing up his hands in stereotypical Italian grocer fashion appeared on the front page of the afternoon Tuleville Times. Tony had gladly cooperated with Pierre for photos. He was happy to get the free advertising for his market, although he didn’t care for Scoop Redford’s accompanying headline over the photo:‘Yes we have no bananas today’
The monkeys were back in their cages on the circus train by the time the Raisin City Gazette stringer arrived on the scene. His editor didn’t even use the story he filed about the incident.

The circus folks, who might have been concerned about how their monkeys got out, were relieved that the local authorities were not mad and were overjoyed about the free publicity for their show that evening. They sent a number of free tickets to the newspaper.

For that reason, Pierre’s family got to go to the circus.

Pierre took some requisite photos, but was able to sit and watch most of the show with his family. Try as he did, little Jack could not get his father to buy any of the many doodads hawkers were selling in the stands, especially not that little toy monkey contraption they were selling. He wouldn’t even buy peanuts. It was then that little Jack first became aware of the fact that his folks were frugal, even if that word was not yet in his vocabulary. But the family did enjoy the show.

…..It was August with September and the start of school just around the corner when the Labrew children trekked down to the local elementary school to see what it was like. They walked across the dusty field that separated their home from the rest of the neighborhood. Then they walked down the streets of the older westside neighborhood with its hodgepodge of wooden Victorians, brick houses, bungalows, and shanties. Many of the houses had front porch swings. Some had chicken coops in the backyards. This was on the west side of the tracks, generally thought of as the poor side of town.

Little Jack was barefoot. He owned shoes, but little boys often went barefoot in this environment. It was another sweltering hot day. The pavement was getting too hot for his feet. He began to walk on a stretch of the street where there was no sidewalk, just dirt. But now he caught a prickly seed of a puncture vine in his foot and let out a yelp.

“Why did we bring him along,” Marie said, with a little laugh of mock disgust. Remy tended to his little brother’s foot with some show of concern. The recorded melody of an ice cream truck was heard. Suddenly children came out from everywhere yelling and screaming. The driver stopped, got out, and walked to the back of his little truck and opened the rear door to reveal an assortment of popsicles and ice cream bars and ice cream sandwiches. Little kids were carrying change in their hands, reaching into their jeans or begging their mothers for money.

This was all new to the San Francisco-raised Labrew children. Fortunately, Remy found some change in his pockets, saved up from his 15-cent per week allowance, and bought popsicles for himself and his brother and sister. Little Jack quickly forgot about his punctured foot, but he did have to do a lot of hopping around on the hot pavement, taking advantage of the few shade trees on the block, as they continued their journey to the school.

They found the typical valley school with the long one story buildings, laid out side by side with open concrete corridors. Looking out of place amid the modern buildings were several wooden clapboard bungalows. They were former World War II barracks buildings moved in from a since abandoned air field. Local schools were dealing with a ballooning enrollment, thanks to the post war baby boom.

The large grass covered playground had swing sets, a jungle gym, and most intriguing of all to little Jack, an old tree trunk on its side, set in a sandbox. He started to run over to it, but Remy told him to wait, that they wanted to look at the school itself before using the playground. Marie was ahead of them and had reached one of the concrete corridors.

“Uggg, this is disgusting!,” she said.

Coming up to her, Remy and Jack saw what she was talking about. There was a large dried turd on the pavement.

“That must have been some big dog!” Remy exclaimed.

“That’s not a dog turd. That was left by a human,” Marie stated in her usual authoritative manner.

Remy looked puzzled. “A person wouldn’t go to the bathroom on the sidewalk, would they?”

 

Oh, I think it was probably one of those colored kids from over there,” Marie answered, pointing over to a section of shacks that bordered on one side of the school. They formed one edge of Tuleville’s colored town. As she said this, her nose turned up slightly. Remy looked around with a somewhat doubtful look on his face.

Meanwhile, little Jack surveyed the offending piece of matter from all angles, avoiding too close of an approach.

Later that afternoon, after returning home, the Labrew children met Martin de Voss, who lived on the farm across the road.

He was tall, toe headed, and broad shouldered, wearing a white T-shirt and blue jeans, rolled up in short cuffs at the bottom. He had a big smile on his face. At first glance, though, it was hard to tell if he was friendly or slightly menacing.

“My dad wonders why you folks are raisin a garden. You can get all the food you need at the store, and besides if everyone raised their own garden farmers would be out of business.”

Remy was caught off guard by the assertion and just stood there looking puzzled. Little Jack felt threatened. Martin de Voss looked huge and menacing to him now. Marie gave him a serious stare and then spoke:

“My father has a right to grow food for his family if he wants to! It’s his business, not yours!”

“Hey, I didn’t mean any harm. I was just trying to get acquainted. My dad’s always saying things. He doesn’t really mean anything by it.”

So, after the initial shock, the Labrew children found that they had a new friend. While the Labrew children were spaced four years apart each and didn’t usually play together, on this day with nothing else to do and being new to Tuleville, they did. They played tag. They played army. And the last thing they played was making believe that they were in Hawaii. At the time, there was a popular television program called the “Harry Owens Show.” The host played the steel guitar out under the palm trees.

Martin de Voss got the idea of dressing little Jack up like a hula dancer. There was an abundant growth of Johnson grass around the septic tank. Marie and Remy and Martin de Voss pulled out clumps of the weeds with big chunks of moist dirt holding together the Johnson grass roots and proceeded to stuff them into the shorts little Jack was wearing. Once done, little Jack did a hula hula dance, much to the delight of the others. He got such a good reaction that he ran into the house to show his mother.

As soon as Marjorie Labrew turned around she saw her little boy do the hula hula dance, mud dropping all over her just-mopped floor.

Little Jack was shocked that instead of a rave review, what he heard was a gasp and a groan from his mother, who quickly scooped him up and took him out to the service porch, stripped off his clothes, and placed him into one of the double wash trays, filling it with warm, almost hot, water.

“I can’t believe that you’d do such a thing!” she scolded.

Meanwhile, outside, the others had taken a break from their play and were sitting under an oak tree. Martin de Voss was telling Remy and Marie that he used to have a little brother like Jack.

“I sure miss him and I hope he’s not looking down at me from heaven and still mad at how I teased him.”

“What happened to him?” asked Remy.

“He drowned in the canal last year. It was hot like today and he jumped in. He knew how to swim, but he couldn’t get back out cause the cement bank was too slippery. There was no one around. He used to swim with me on our farm, but our ditch has a dirt bank and you can grab onto the dirt and weeds. But he was on his way home from a friend’s house when he jumped in by hisself.”

The other two didn’t know quite what to say. It was so sad. Finally they both said they were sorry.

“Oh, I’m getting over it. I know nothing will bring him back and that he is in heaven. My dad’s never going to get over it, though, I don’t think. But anyway, you guys be careful. Don’t try to swim in the canals. My dad won’t even let me swim in the ones on our farm anymore. They got a public pool here. Get your folks to take you there.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tuleville Sundown: updated note to readers

July 9, 2008 by tonywalther

Still having technical problems and time problems, but you’re welcome to read what I have done so far on my novel in progress. See previous posts below:

Tuleville Sundown (Page 23)

July 7, 2008 by tonywalther

Note: The rest of this novel in progress can be found by way of the Yahoo search bar by going to:

http://360.yahoo.com/anthonywalther@att.net

Been having some problems with posting it, so I went to this site. If I keep having problems with the old site, I may post the whole thing here. Anyway to my faithful old readers, I appreciate your patience and for any new ones, welcome aboard. I’ll try to make it easier.

Also, if the text size is too small, you should be able to adjust that on your own computer screen. I have a glitch going on that too.

 

 A New Outlook

(copyright)

By Tony Walther

….The day that began with his having driven into his own wall in front of his house turned out to be a new beginning for Hal de Voss, or at least that’s the way he felt at the time. Lying there on the couch early that morning after the new neighbor across the street helped him to his front door, de Voss took stock of himself. This time he had really done it. He had smashed up the family car as the result of a night of drinking at the Club 99. It was not the first time he had been out late drinking, but it never had gotten so out of hand. He knew he drank because he was unhappy with himself and his lot in life. He was an unsuccessful farmer and an unsuccessful husband, and in his own eyes an unsuccessful father, having lost his youngest he felt because he hadn’t taught him or warned him enough to not jump into the concrete-lined main canal. And he was not a good role model for the living son. He never made money milking cows, even though others, such as Frank Silva, did. Switching to raising alfalfa hay without the cows didn’t make him prosperous. And how did he know those years ago when he sold that tract across the street it would be turned into a housing subdivision and make the new landowner so much money? He couldn’t provide the things he wanted for his wife and he wasn’t exactly a joy to be around. He was always working, feeling sorry for himself, or trying to drink his sorrows away.But he had decided that he would change. He got up off the couch, tiptoed into the bedroom, where his wife Alice was still sleeping, and grabbed some Sunday clothes out of the closet, got dressed in the living room, and put on some coffee and put some bread in the toaster to make cinnamon toast. He then awoke his wife and son Martin and informed them that they were all going to church.Alice was shocked and perhaps a little skeptical, but at the same time she welcomed any sign that things might change.

 

Almost too late, Hal de Voss remembered that the car was still smashed against the front wall. He had to explain quickly that he had had a little accident last night, but not to worry, he was alright and all’s well that ends well and that he would get the car fixed and things were going to change. Yes he had been inebriated, he was ashamed to admit, but that was for the last time. He had seen the light. He was turning over a new leaf. He realized the blessings he had, a good wife and a fine son, and he was going to make them proud. He’d go out right now and clean out the old pickup truck and they could go to church in that.

 And so the de Voss family went to St. Aloysius Catholic Church, with young Martin riding in the truck bed. Hal de Voss had attended church as a young boy, but not since then. Wife Alice, attended sporadically. She had been extremely upset about the car, but seemed mollified by her husband’s proclaimed desire to turn things around.

Walking down the steps after the service, Hall de Voss felt good. He didn’t remember much about the day’s sermon, but he had bumped into Carl Bismark, a major landowner in the county, who grew a lot of cotton and who also pastured a herd of white face cattle on irrigated Ladino clover pasture. Mr. Bismark was in the market for some hay to winter his herd and struck up a deal with de Voss, recognizing him as a local alfalfa grower.
…Meanwhile, the Labrew family, not church goers, were driving through the countryside out the peculiarly-named “Crooked Road.” Mechanical cotton pickers were still out in force, there were fields of alfalfa, some fields were full of pumpkins and there were grape vineyards, and walnut and almond and peach orchards here and there. Also, there were a lot of dairy farms. The Labrew children all remarked about the stinky odor of the dairy cows, many of which could be seen lying on mounds of dry manure, chewing their cuds. Pierre told them it was a not unpleasant odor to him, he rather liked it. That opinion was not shared by Marjorie Labrew.
Pierre was on the lookout for barns, especially ones that looked different somehow. He needed an assortment from which to put together a photo layout for the newspaper. He knew a lot about barns, for instance, he was able to point out that one was an old “mule barn.” But he had a hard time deciding which ones to photograph, especially since a lot of them looked fairly similar and also because he always had a hard time making up his mind on just about anything. At one point, little Jack spotted a strange looking rounded structure, not really a barn, but some type of outbuilding, in which ears of corn could be seen through wire mesh. Pierre looked over at it but did not stop the Studebaker. By this time they were off the Crooked Road and were onto some other county road, for which they had not noticed the name. Later, when Pierre decided that maybe he should have taken a photograph of the building with the corn, he had a hard time finding it. They spent much of the afternoon crisscrossing the countryside and finally found it. Jack was fully enjoying the adventure, his brother and sister were getting a little antsy to get home, and Marjorie was fairly content, but missing San Francisco, nonetheless. There was no ocean, no salt air, hot and sticky days instead of cool crisp days, no tall buildings, no hustle and bustle, no Golden Gate and not much variety. The countryside was flat, and except for the Crooked Road, most of the country lanes were laid out in checkerboard fashion amid flat land as far as the eye could see.
…Monday morning, Hal de Voss went to Linderman’s Hardware Store downtown to pick up various odds and ends. Sunday afternoon he had made a list of things he would need to spruce things up and make repairs around the farm.

He ran into Frank Silva, who seemed glad to see him:

“Hey Hal, just the man I wanted to see. You know, I got to thinking. I could buy hay from you and save quite a bit on shipping costs. I know you got good hay.”

“Oh, gee Frank. I was at church yesterday, but I didn’t see you. Sorry, I’ve committed it to Carl Bismark.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

Small town life in the 1950s…

June 25, 2008 by tonywalther

I have  a novel going about life in a small town, growing up there, and life changes for adults, all taking place in California’s Central Valley, circa  1950s.

I encourage you to visit my blogsite by going to your yahoo search bar and entering:

http://360.yahoo.com/anthonywalther@att.net

Or you may be able to access it on Google by simply writing in Tuleville Sundown.

Meanwhile, If you have been following my story on this blog, Great Highway, I’ll try to get some more of it going in the near future.

But try out Tuleville Sundown.

Tony Walther

Great Highway (Page 7, An Arrest)

June 8, 2008 by tonywalther

 

(Copyright)

By Tony Walther

“I’ll get the car inspector,” Lt. Davis said.

The inspector seemed lost in thought and did not acknowledge the lieutenant.

“Is something wrong sir?” Lt. Davis asked.

“No, I heard you. Yes, you get then car. But go ahead without me. You know how to interview. You don’t need me. I’ll take the street car as I usually do. You can meet me later at the Seagull.”

Lt. Davis raised his eyebrows and then said: “You’re the boss — you outrank me.”

In the darkness of the Sunset Tunnel, the streetcar rolled along making the hummummum sound, which was soothing to the inspector’s mind. He pondered where he might have seen the short man who was their only suspect. By the time he sat down on his bar stool at the Seagull, he recalled.

“Stevey, isn’t there a little short guy who sometimes comes in here and sits quietly in the corner?”

“Little Henry. He’s a fuss budget. He used to sit at the bar sometimes, but he was always getting into an argument. I run a peaceful place. Never have to call the cops. I told him, from now on, if you come in here, sit in the corner and mind your own business. He just comes in occasionally now, usually on Fridays after he gets paid.”

“Was he in last Friday?”

“No, he wasn’t.”

“Do you know where Henry lives?”

“No, he never said. I don’t talk to him anymore than I have to. Why are you looking for him? No, don’t tell me. He’s the guy who’s been grabbing the young girls off the street. Well, lucky you’re on to something. The papers are having a field day with this one. ‘Teenage girls vanish off the streets of Sunset and cops do nothing.’”

“Who says that?!” the inspector demanded.

“Hey, hold on there Cracky, I’m just quoting the newspaper. Didn’t you read the Sunday paper and the paper today?”

“I’m not interested in what the papers say,” the inspector lied. In reality, he was embarrassed he hadn’t read the papers. It was out of character for him.

He sat for hours watching and listening and occasionally engaging in short conversation as the customers came and went. The clientele was predominantly male, mostly working class men or retired men, with an occasional lawyer or businessman. Rarely they might be accompanied by a woman.

There was considerable talk about the vanishing girls of Sunset as one of the papers referred to in its stories. Some people asked the inspector about it. Some brave ones even questioned why he was sitting in the bar, to which he allowed, what better place to get leads?

The talk of possible culprits centered on transients from the park and old men who walked around the neighborhoods.

The inspector felt a tap on his shoulder and turned to find a beaming Lt. Davis staring him in the face.

“Inspector, we’ve got an arrest.”

Great Highway (Page 6, A Clear Assignment)

June 4, 2008 by tonywalther

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By Tony Walther

“Don’t tell me he could be the culprit who has got hold of those girls!”

“We really don’t know, mam,” Lt. Davis, who was beginning to feel left out, said. “We are just following up on what information we have.”

“So, was the grumpy little man Henry Watson, and do you have a forwarding address for him?” the inspector asked.

“Yes, that was his name, but no I don’t have a forwarding address. I wished I did. He still owes me a month’s rent,” Aunt Mary answered.

A short time later, the two detectives got in their car.

“We might as well go back to the bureau and write up our reports so we don’t miss out on any of our weekend,” the inspector told Lt. Davis, who shrugged his shoulders and smiled and then started up the car and pulled out onto the street.

“If I thought there was anything else we could do, I would say let’s get at it,” the inspector said. “But we have nothing to go on, as of now.”

And that was that.

The inspector spent Saturday in his apartment listening to classical music records and wondering why he never got married and what the meaning of his life was. He dressed in his work clothes on Sunday — he didn’t have any casual clothes — and skipped church, as he usually did, despite being raised Catholic, and walked several blocks to Union Square. He fed the pigeons with old bread he brought along. He felt guilty for wasting the bread, remembering how his immigrant parents had struggled, but enjoyed watching the tourists. He watched them taking the standard photos of each other in the City. He didn’t know much about photography, but he knew that the photos would have a lamp post or a tree sticking out of someone’s head and probably would not do justice to the surroundings. They’d be better off to just take in the sights and enjoy the moment and to breathe in the perfumed scent of the flower stalls.

Monday morning things were calm in the inspector’s apartment as he slept peacefully, not having to be at work until late afternoon. The Sunday paper lay on the floor, unread.

But it was not calm at the detective bureau.

Captain Altman, head of detectives, had been looking over his mail when he heard the booming voice of none other than the Chief of Police, who had made a special trip over to his office.

“What in the holy hell do you people think your job is? Why is my phone ringing off the hook? There are three sets of terrified parents out in the Sunset whose teenaged daughters have disappeared! Your detectives have only briefly spoken with one father and have done very little as far as I can see! The stories in the papers are condemning the department for sitting on its collective hands. I’m not happy Captain! And as long as I’m not happy, no one is going to be happy around here! You got that Captain?!”

The Captain said he understood it “loud and clear.”

The chief went on, but the result was that when Inspector Krackov and Lt. Davis showed up for work around four in the afternoon, they had a clear assignment: meet with all of the parents and get this case solved immediately.

Great Highway (Page 5, Aunt Mary)

June 3, 2008 by tonywalther

 

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By Tony Walther

“Lets cruise up Judah Street,” the inspector said. “I know an apartment house where working men stay.”

The inspector and lieutenant climbed the steep concrete steps of the apartment building. The inspector rang the doorbell. Momentarily, the door opened and there stood a heavy set old woman in an apron.

“Good evening Aunt Mary,” the inspector said.

“Inspector Krackov, what a surprise,” she said with a smile and then grabbed the inspector in a bear hug. The lieutenant stepped back a little, preferring not to be smothered in the old woman’s bosom.

Aunt Mary led the two through a darkened hallway as they took in the not unpleasant, but somewhat strange odor of a home kept by an older person.

George will want to see you,” she said. “He is bedridden, I am afraid, but you can talk to him while I fix you some coffee and cake in the kitchen.”

The inspector instantly felt sorry for the poor old man, a retired butcher, who used to putter around the home with a giant and almost always unlit stogie protruding from one side of his mouth. He was always trying to fix something and managing to get in Aunt Mary’s way. Aunt Mary led the two detectives to the bedroom and left them there.

The old man, whose covers were up to his chin in an already somewhat overly warm house, seemed to perk up at the sight of them.

“Inspector. Good to see you. Excuse me for being in this condition, but I think I’ll feel better by spring.”

 ”Sure you will George. Let me introduce my partner, Lt. Davis.”

The two, the old man and the lieutenant, nodded at each other.

 ”So what brings you here? Don’t tell me you’re looking for one of our tenants. I wish I was up and able. I wouldn’t rent to some of these men Mary lets in here.”

“No George, we’re just doing what detectives always do, wandering around aimlessly till we hit it lucky,” the inspector said, paused, and then added, “but seriously, would you know if any of them work at Playland?”

“You’d have to ask Mary. I don’t know myself.” After a little small talk, George suddenly dozed off.

The two detectives made their way to the kitchen, where they were served coffee and chocolate cake. The inspector asked Aunt Mary if any of her tenants worked at Playland.

“Mmmm, no, not any of my current ones. But funny you should ask. A short little grumpy man used to live here. Never got along with anyone else. He lost his job and couldn’t pay his rent. I had to evict him. I felt bad, but I can’t afford to keep people for free. I told him I heard that they were looking for someone to keep the grounds clean at Playland. I saw the ad in the newspaper. You know I read the newspaper from front to back each day.”

And then she stopped suddenly, as if some reality had suddenly struck her.

Great Highway (Page 4, Searching Playland)

June 1, 2008 by tonywalther

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By Tony Walther

There were two squad cars and several policemen standing around and one on horseback. One of the policeman was writing notes in a little book while he talked to the clearly distraught father.

“I don’t know how I’m goona break the news to Marge,” the man was saying in an almost whining voice, as the inspector and lieutenant approached.

Introductions were made and the policeman with the notebook filled the two detectives in on what was known so far. A search had been made of Playland. People had been questioned. But no one said they even saw the girl.

Inspector Krackov looked up at the mounted officer. “You might as well get back to the park. But keep your eyes open and check out any transients.”

Then he turned and said to the father: “Sir, if you want, you can come with us and we’ll go back through Playland here and ask some more questions and you can fill us in on your daughter’s friends and habits as we go.”

At one point they found themselves in front of the Fun House, and Old Sal was laughing her head off. It was hard to hear anything else, but the father was trying to explain that his daughter was always punctual and never strayed off. Why she hadn’t been waiting outside the gates like she said she would, was unfathomable to him.

The inspector was taking all this in the best he could but his eyes wondered. He saw a man with balloons and stopped him. “Hello, I’m Inspector Krakov, SFPD, have you seen a teenage girl, with long blond hair and a print dress?”

The man selling balloons looked a little startled and then said: “Yes, as a matter of fact, I did. She was right here, and she seemed to be arguing with a little short man. I’m not sure, but I think he may work here. I started to go see what the matter was, but someone tugged at me and said they wanted balloons. When I turned around, the girl and the man were no longer there. I didn’t think any more about it.”

“How long ago was this sir?”

“Oh, probably about an hour or maybe more.”

Laughing Sal never stops, so the inspector had to practically yell at Lt. Davis. “We’re looking for a short guy who may work here — let’s go to the office.”

The manager confirmed that there was a short man whose main job was to walk around the amusement park and pick up trash with one of those sticks with a spear end, but that he had already gone home for the day.

“And he lives where?” asked the inspector.

“I hate to say it, but I don’t know. I hired him, Henry Watson, is his name. He wandered in here a month ago looking for a job. I just happened to need someone that day and hired him on the spot.”

“Don’t you keep records on your employees?” Lt. Davis asked.

“Well, normally, yes,” the manager answered sheepishly. “But I pay Henry cash each Friday, if he’s had hours that week. He doesn’t work every day, just when I call him to give us a hand. We have a kind of casual relationship.”

“I see,” said the inspector. “You need to casually tell us next time he’s here.”

The inspector handed the manager one of his cards with the detective bureau number on it.

The forlorn father went home. The two detectives got into their car.

Great Highway (Page 3, call at Playland)

May 31, 2008 by tonywalther

 

“Bonjour Inspector!” said Louie Duval, stretching out a calloused hand in greeting.

 Both men shook hands. And then the inspector said:

“You work too hard Louie. And what for? You are all by yourself. You need a little woman.”

“Ah, and when I finish this cellar and fix up the rest of my little love nest, I will find myself a little woman, as you say, and we will spend our days drinking wine and enjoying the sunsets.”

“Now that sounds like a worthwhile plan,” the inspector commented, and then after a pause, added:

“Have you heard about the two girls who are missing?”

“I read the story in today’s paper. I don’t know them, but I feel sad for their parents. I’ve always thought of this as a peaceful neighborhood. That’s why I came out here.”

“It is a peaceful place,” the inspector said. “I hope we can keep it that way.”

He bid the Frenchman farewell and walked on. He saw the black ford sedan slowing down as it approached him. He recognized it as an unmarked patrol car before it came to a complete stop.

“Hey inspector. Jump in. We got a call down at Playland.”

 He got in. Lt. Mike Davis was at the wheel. As they cruised up Great Highway, Lt. Davis explained the situation:

“It’s another young girl. Her father went to pick her up at Playland, but she was nowhere to be found. He’s frantic.”

“From what you’ve told me so far, it may be nothing more than miscommunication,” the inspector said. “Maybe she’s in the tunnel of love with her boyfriend or maybe she never went to Playland in the first place.”

 ”No,” Davis responded. “The father says he dropped her off there earlier and that she had called him and said she’d be waiting out front.”

“It does seem strange to have three missing girls in one week,” the inspector allowed after a pause. “I was a beat cop ten years ago when we had the Shanghai murders in Chinatown. Four young ladies grabbed off the street. We thought they were being abducted to be sold into the white slavery market. But we eventually found two bodies buried in a park at the edge of Chinatown.”

“I heard about that case, but I didn’t hear what happened to the other two.”

“Dunno, the killer never admitted to more than two murders.”

They arrived at the Playland parking lot, which overlooked Ocean Beach and the vast Pacific Ocean, into which the sun, like a golden ball, was setting.